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Garrett feels forgotten about...he'll be gladly surprised with Lori's surprise visit.

We are the opposite. LOL. My series is usually first person while my single stories are third person and normally just the TV characters. POVs are hard. My problem with first person, I always worry about repeating myself or find myself repeating myself in other characters POV or even the same sometimes. I need to find a way to get past that. LOL. But yeah, your advice did come in handy and I appreciate all your help. I think I will rewrite Hogg's POV, rethink of a new start, and go with first person. Stick with what I am comfortable with and stick to my routine. (I say that now...wait a day, a week, a month my opinion may change. LOL!) Thanks again!
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I guess I am more comfortable keeping my series writing in first POV...my comfort zone I guess you can call it. And my solo stories in third point of view. Odd isn't it. Though my solo or single stories don't normally have any of my created characters, just the show characters. You have pretty much said how I felt so I will most likely keep it as it is, just have to figure out how to do the bad guys and Boss. Like right now, I got chapter one started for Boss, but it is in third person...and I like how it is right now. Don't think I could get it in first person and have it be the same, I'd have to start all over...wouldn't be the end of the world I guess. LOL
Thank-you for your help. I guess I just worry about no one reading my story and not liking it because it is in first POV and all. I appreciate all of your advice. As of now, I think I am going to take your advice and keep it the same. Perhaps change the bad guys...I don't know. LOL. Thanks again!
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Wow you got Garrett pegged pretty well! LOL. He is completely two sided...he wants the attention, but when he gets it, he's upset about it. He is never satisfied.
Garrett would enjoy a visit from Lori...though he'd never verbally admit it of course. He'd have to ditch his attitude and ego in order to do that and for some reason he don't seem willing to ditch any of them.
Glad Lori is behaving herself. Sounds like she likes her new atmosphere...her new job and role in her muse-life. Which is good...even if it isn't in Hazzard county.

