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Bahaha! You do NOT know how much Garrett just boosted up Lori's ego... And here she thought he had forgotten how to smile.
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Bwahaha! Garrett can be delighted in his gloomy, sour, grouchy sort of way. haha! But we all love him just the same. He provides amusing entertainment.
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You're very welcome darlin'! Atleast you thought and even may attempt to change your writing, not many do. We need a lot more people to care about what they write.
Hahaha! I'd expect nothing less from your fickle opinion!
Check ya inbox...I'm pretty sure Garrett's gonna find his surprise! Haha!
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Hehe, well she may just end up and surprise him one of these days Not too often she gets a reason to stroll back into Hazzard.
I'm glad my advice helped. I know it's difficult to work with POVs so you're not alone. I'm the opposite though, I find it difficult to write in the first person and usually only write those for a solo, but that's for things like HP, LoTR, Naruto....If I'm using Lori though, I'm like you, I find it easier to write in the Third person. Just stick to what you feel is right and what makes YOU happy.
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It's cases like that though, is why I stick to strictly Third POV. Which POV do you feel more comfortable with?
Hehe, well she may just make a visit to see her pal She misses Garrett as well, as do I! It's been so long since I've heard from him directly, heh. Hahaha! That's the greatest thing about having a muse like him though, it's always interesting. Lori and I don't differ too much at all, though we don't usually see eye to eye on some things.
Yes that definitely sounds like him LOL poor Kristy. But even if he did kick her to the side, he'd just get grouchy because you're using him and not her. It's a danged if you do and danged if you don't situation with him...he gets jealous cause you DONT use him and when you DO, he doesnt want you too.
She actually is behaving for me. Well, as far as a demon/bounty hunter CAN behave LOL. I've converted her to Supernatural, of all things. ROFL!
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Yeah, when dealing with POVs, people tend to like having one POV throughout the entire book. It gets difficult because when playing the bad guys you use terms like I and Me and it gets confusing. So, like the Twilight series and please forgive me for using such a horrible piece of writing, the writer tends to name what person is telling the story. The only time someone really understands using both POVs during a story is with flashbacks.
But I seriously don't see how it would get confusing from using first POV then using third POV for the baddies, I really don't. Was it just that one person or what? Because, that wouldn't be confusing...it would actually be helpful and LESS confusing. So, if that's your comfort zone, then do it. Because if it's only one person and not a whole group, then that person simply doesn't know how to read.
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You always have trouble with what POV to use. But, I don't blame you really, certain stories call for certain POVs. If you need help, just let me know.
Haha, I would be heart broken if I let my muses down. I use Lori for other things now, I thought of putting her to rest completely, but actually teared up at the idea. She's just too much apart of me.
I hope you can get back into the swing of writing, I know it's frustrating, believe me. Glad everything is okay with you there.
Have a Good day!
~Lori
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Well don't get me wrong, I still love Dukes, just gave up writing for it. I've been a member on here for too long to not come back to this place. hehe. How's things going with you?
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Heh, I love the cold weather so I'm usually outside then too. But, just cause you're such a flattering person and a great friend to me, I'll definitely sign in more often than I have.
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Hey Rog! It's gettin' pretty around here since it's finally fall! I've been outside mostly, hence why I've not been on here much at all lately! How're you doing?