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Hey Garrett. Things are good here, been outside and whatnot since it's finally fall. Been writing for LoTR mainly, finally found a fandom, other than Harry Potter, that I fit in nicely with. I've put anything and everything that is Dukes to rest, finally. I've found something I'm really good at and unfortunaly, Dukes isn't one of them. Hope all is well with you.
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It's cool and I don't really see how it would hurt feelings, to be honest. I mean all writers try to publish their works in any way they know how so they can get feedback to see how they can improve their writing and such.
-Lori
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You're welcome. Yeah, you can post it on FFnet, usually you'll get atleast a few reviews and you can also see how many people have read your story through the statistics. I know it has a page like that...cause I seen it...or was that on deviant art?...ah heck I can't member LOL.
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It really depends on what the reader likes. Change, for some, is good. The third person can be quite boring if you don't add the right amount of details, whereas the first person allows the reader to step into the character's shoes. Though I do find writing in the third person to be easier (for me, atleast). Change for you could be good, where you've used the first person thus far. So I do suggest changing up the POV and see how your readers react to it, if they like it, keep it and if they don't, switch back to the first person. Sometimes if an author uses one POV for so long they tend to become boring and predictable, or rather the character does-the readers, understanding how a character thinks and acts, will automatically know what the character will say or do, thus making the story predictable.-So change is good, I say go for it.
~Lori
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Roger!! Haha, hey buddy-roe how's things been going for ya here lately? I've been doing well and such, finished up high school finally so it's Army bound here soon! Haha, yeah it has been a while since I've been on here, sorry 'bout that. Hope all is well with you and your family.
~Lori
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Hey, haha yeah it has been a while since I've been on here and actually contributed to the community, hasn't it? How've you been doing? Finally have high school finished up down on this end and am working towards the Army still yet. Probably either be this winter or early next fall, I'm pretty excited. Other than that I've been mainly watching Supernatural and writing here and there. Hope all is well for you and Garrett is cooperating the way he should.
~Lori
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Hola senorita. Things are going good here, take my last exam tomorrow and Im finished with home school. The Army is getting closer and closer! Hope things are going well with you.