Dixie and Beth's RR stories feedback!

[bethie88]

What do y'all think of our stories... The Going Home series and I'm a Danged Fool?

[bethie88]

What do y'all think of our stories... The Going Home series and I'm a Danged Fool?

[smurfette]

I love the Going Home one

[smurfette]

I love the Going Home one

[DixieDavenport]

Thnaks -- Smuffette

Dixie

[DixieDavenport]

Thnaks -- Smuffette

Dixie

[bethie88]

Thanks!

[bethie88]

Thanks!

[Guest]

I Would love to see more of I'm a Danged Fool , Going Home part 3 i hope Luke don't get hurt in the fire wouldn't that be a mess for him to miss the birth of his baby ?

[bethie88]

Thanks, Kitty. And I wouldn't worry too much about ol' Luke... he's a big boy! He can take care of himself.

[DixieDavenport]

Beth -- LOL!!!

Dixie

[just_me]

I think i'm a danged fool, is great!! Really good wrighting!

You had me up half the night reading it.

(Only thing i noticed wass that first Luke was 18 and Dixie 15 and in the

end Luke is 2 years older and Dixie about 3)

Please keep on wrighting cause i really would like to know how it ends.

Lov,

JM

[bethie88]

Hm... I'm not sure how that happened... Maybe it was 2 1/2 years. lol.

But thanks! I appreciate the good feedback and the constructive criticism.

~Beth

[Moms lil' Daisy]

Hey now I've told ya both that i love readin yur stories and it's about time ya'all got this post up. Anyways, you girls are great, I love readin both "I'm a Danged Fool", and "going home" I've followed them all and they are great. Luv it. You two make a great team and you keep up with eachother. Keep up the great work i look forward to readin them still.

Desi

[bethie88]

Thanks! That's sweet of you!

~Beth

[DixieDavenport]

Tanks ya'll for the kind words!

JM wrote: (Only thing i noticed wass that first Luke was 18 and Dixie 15 and in the

end Luke is 2 years older and Dixie about 3)

Sorry for the confussion firstly. Maybe this will help . In Danged Fool I believe (Beth ??) that Beth is 16 and Bo is 17 almost 18 which puts Luke about 20. I didn't see Dixie being in this until a while back. But it is my intention to have her just under 4 years younger than Luke through my stories. (Ususally this is unknown to all of Hazzard including Luke as she acts and looks much older)

I hope that helped you can also view Dixie's and Jake's character sketches in the other section soon -- if I'd go finish them! LOL

Dixie

[redneck woman]

I've enjoyed reading both of your stories. Your writing really draws a reader into the story. Keep up the excellent work!

[DixieDavenport]

Thanks from us both

Dixie

[bethie88]

*nods* Thanks indeed! That's really nice of you to say!

[miz_smarteepantz]

I just finished Dang fool and have read going home and just let me say I LOOOOOOOVED both. I can't wait to read updates to see what messes these guys and gals get into next. Very entertaining and well written. I have been up really really late reading these because they are too good to shut down till I've reached the end of a page so I had to make myself shut down the computer before starting a new page. Again excellent job and keep it coming

brandy_lou

[bethie88]

Wow! I'm really glad you liked them that much!

[AmandaRobson]

I love I'm a danged fool!!! It's great, you're telling an awesome story. I wanna know what happens next!!! And Dixie your last post was awesome....now ya'll got me hooked and I'm on the edge of my seat! What's gonna happen next????

[DixieDavenport]

LOL Thanks!! Glad you are enjoying it -- sometimes I wonder if I'm boring people....IT's posts like this tht encourage me to continue!!

Thanks again!

Dixie

[AmandaRobson]

Yes yes keep going!!! I love it!!! Go faster!!! LOL I wanna know what happens!! And if I cab help lemme know!!! LOL keep it up!!

[bethie88]

lol! Glad you like it!