Beta reader, huh Val? That is nice to know. I have deep respect for writers, and for those who are just starting. I helped a friend once, she told what kind of kid story she would like to write for her course, a story about a young girl (9) and her dad, title X-mas or Christmas. The next day I had a story wrote, I was so inspired and honored she asked my help, so the story just came straight out of me. I then found out , just how much work it was to properly phrase things, and POV importance in the characters and so on. I never realized just how tuff, making my story readable and entertaining could be. Publishers are very stricked on Paragraghs and details of each character and making a story interesting to read, and easy to follow. We wrote it up at least 5 times, studying other formats and such, and our first time out, we got praised for the story, however, still needed much work on presentation and such. Now I am getting to want to write RP, and learn as much as I can, studying others, doing research and so on, all of which you pointed out Val. Appreciate that lots, and anything worth doing, is worth researching.