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Meanwhile, uncle Jesse was alone at the hospital. Boss and Rosco left promising him they're going to help Bo and Luke to find Daisy. He couldn't talk to Bo and Luke because of their CB, so he was more and more worried. He sighed and he decided to go to Enos's room, even if he was sleeping; it was useless to stay alone in the lobby. In the hallway, near Enos's room, he met the Doc who talked to him previously, "Doc, Enos woke up awhile ago, but he was strage, he didn't even recognize me. I'm very worry". The Doc put a hand on uncle Jesse's shoulder, "Mr. Duke, he's going to live but he had a bad concussion and several injuries...."; uncle Jesse nodded, "Yes, I know", stopping the Doc to list all Enos's injuries, something he didn't need and he didn't want to listen again. The Doc stay silent for awhile, then he kept on talking, "It's normal he's confused by now. He might lose memory 'bout what's happened, and he might be confused 'bout a lot of things, included things 'bout his past, but it's only a temporary condition, and...". A nurse called the Doc from Enos's room, "Doc, he's having seizures!!". The Doc rushed to Enos's room and uncle Jesse flopped down into a chair, praying.
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Bo and Luke were terrified 'bout what's happening. Everything was going wrong: Enos in hospital, and now Daisy in that truck down the hill. Everything seemed to go in slow-motion. The boys were looking at the truck moving down the hill. Bo put his hands on his eyes, shouting, "Noooo!!!!!". The young Duke was waiting for an explosion (the truck's explosion after its fall down the hill), but fortunately he didn't hear any explosion, so he lowered his hands to see what's happening. A tree had stopped the truck, and now the truck was immobile, in a precarious position, near the ravine, but immobile. Bo and Luke rushed toward the truck.
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Hey DaisyXEnos, I think there's a problem in "Who's gonna stop it". I think that Julie and dukefan posted a message almost in the same time, so Julie's piece of story doesn't follow dukefan's piece (Daisy isn't in the barn anymore but she's in the truck). We'll go on without using Julie's last post, OK? Remember, Daisy is in the truck (and she's in danger) and not in the barn, OK?
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Hey dukefan, I think there's a problem in "Who's gonna stop it". I think that you and Julie posted a message almost in the same time, so Julie's piece of story doesn't follow your one ('cause she posted it before reading your post.... what a mess LOL). I won't use Julie's last message, and I'll follow your lines. I ask Julie to delete her last message, but I don't know if she can do it. Anyway, we'll go on without using Julie's last post, OK?
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Hey Julie, I think there's a problem in "Who's gonna stop it". I think that you and dukefan posted a message almost in the same time, so your piece of story doesn't follow dukefan's piece (Daisy isn't in the barn anymore but she's in the truck). If you don't mind I won't use your last message, following dukefan's lines. You should delete your last message, but I don't know if you can do it. Anyway, we'll go on without using your last message, OK?
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Daisy was in dispair. "Where are you boys? I don't want to die. Please, save me", her eyes were full of tears. Her head was more and more heavy, and she felt weak. A lot of thoughts were floating in her mind: uncle Jesse, the boys, her farm, the Boar's Nest, and Enos. She was worried 'bout Enos; she knew he was in hospital, badly injured, but she couldn't be with him, and maybe she wouldn't be with him anymore. With these thought in her mind Daisy passed out. Bo and Luke were trying to find that sawmill barn. "If something bad happens to Daisy, I'll kill those men, I swear, I'll kill them", Bo ground his teeth. Luke was more able to stay calm than his young cousin (or at least to pretend to be calm), "Bo, please, we need all our coldness. Try to reason about where she could be", then Luke closed his eyes and took a deep breath, "A sawmill barn. How many sawmill barns there are in Hazzard, and where these sawmill barns are?", then he opened his eyes and snapped his fingers, "Bo, I've got it!!". At the hospital Enos opened again his eyes. He was alone in the small white room. He was so confused; he didn't remember anything 'bout what's happened, but, the worst of all, he didn't remember almost anything 'bout himself. "I'm a cop, I remember I'm a cop, but........ my family, have I a family? Who's that man? My dad? A friend? Oh my God. Where am I? Who am I?"
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Slowly Enos woke up. He looked at the ceiling, a ceiling he didn't know. He had pain everywhere in his body. He tried to take a deep breath, but he had to stop because of pain in his chest. "Enos? How do you feel?", he heard a voice near him. He swallowed, "Where am I?", he said with a throaty voice. "You are in the hospital", the same voice answered him. "Hospital? Why?", he wispered. Uncle Jesse stood up and came closer him, "A crash. You had a bad crash, but you're still alive". Enos was confused, "Crash? Where? Why?". Uncle Jesse took Enos's hand, "Don't worry, and try to rest". The old man didn't want to tell him 'bout Daisy (he was too week to stand Daisy's kidnapping). Enos closed his eyes, and uncle Jesse sat down with a sigh, praying for Daisy's safety, "Please guys, find her, please".
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The Dukes didn't know where to find Daisy. They didn't know who kidnapped her and in particular they didn' know why. "Enos told us only that someone kidnapped Daisy, but we don't anything else. What we can do, Luke?" Bo looked his cousin; Luke was wiser than him and he usually didn't loose his temper. Actually Bo wasn't able to think because of the shock of seeing his best friend almost dead, and because of fear 'bout Daisy's fate. It was the first time they really feared everything's going wrong. Luke took a deep breath, "Look for her. She's somewhere, and we'll find her", he put a hand on Bo's shoulder, trying to calm his young cousin. "Come on", so they got in the General, leaving Enos's life in Doc's hands: now there was another life to save.
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Daisy opened her eyes. Her head was hurting, and she had a buzz in her ears. Suddenly she remembered those men, the kidnapping and Enos chasing them. Now those men were looking at her. The young woman looked at them, her eyes full of anger, "What do you want from me? You are in trouble, guys. My cousins are surely looking for me, and when they'll find you, and they'll find you for sure, they'll kick you. Moreover my friend his a cop, and when he'll find you, after my cousins have kicked you, he'll arrest you. And...." "Shut up", the blond man looked at her with cold eyes, "You're friend WAS a cop. He's dead after the crash". Daisy turned pale and remained silent, remembering the crash. The dark man looked at the blonde one a bit surprised; how did he know 'bout the cop? Then he looked at the girl, pale and with a vacant look on her face, and he understood: now Daisy was totally incapable to react; she was totally in their hands.
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The Official Photo Caption Thread
i1976 replied to Meadowmufn's topic in HazzardNet Photoshop Contests
"Hey cop, give my tunes back. They are miiiiine. My own...... my love..... my precioussssss". Mhhhh, sorry, a cross-over with LOTR. -
Bo was driving the General Lee, with Luke by his side. The boys were talking and laughing, unaware of Daisy and Enos's fate. Suddenly Luke's eye caught Enos's patrol car. "Ol Enos crashed again, but at least this time he wasn't chasing us", Bo grinned. As usual, the boys approached to check everything was OK and nobody was injured. But what they saw made them shiver. Enos was laying on the ground, unconscious; there was blood around him but they didn't understand where exactly he was injured. They rushed to their friend's side; Luke carefully turn him over and called him. The deputy slowly opened his eyes, whispering, "Daisy..... kidnapped", then he passed out. It was a tragic moment for the boys: their best friend was lying unconscious and bleeding in their arms, and Daisy was somewhere, kidnapped by strangers.
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"Who's gonna stop it" is a Round Robin and not a Role Play (you should understand the difference), and it's not kind to jump in telling me to read the rules. Every writer is welcome, I've only asked to use original characters because I'm confused when there are too many created characters in a same fic (It's my fault, I know, but it's difficult for me writing something consistent when there are characters I don't know very well). I can imagine Hazzard only with original characters. A limit? Maybe it's a "limit". In round robin board there are a lot of RR where only two-three writers can join in (they claim it at the beginning of the RR), but I think that it's their right to ask to try writing a story like that. I don't get angry for it. Anyway, there are a lot of round robins, you can like it or not. But you're not kind saying "illegible and incoherent babbling". Yeah, there are strange RR (), but you're not respectful to people who write only for fun. Everyone has the right to enjoy writing something, maybe "babbling", or maybe trying to write something more "leggible". But it's not to you to judge how people write or how people try to have fun. Well, I'm glad you're back Chet, and I hope to read something from you. Let me know who exactly Chet is. Maybe I'll go over my limit and I'll learn how to interact with new characters.
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Enos realizes he's just run by Daisy, so he stops, looking in his rear view mirror. Even if he's a bit drowsy, his cop's instict tells him there's something wrong, so he starts back to find Daisy. Finally he sees Daisy, but there's someone with her. Something's going wrong. Enos speeds up to reach Diasy and those two new guys (again, his cop's istinct tells him they're bad guys).
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Only original characters, Julie. Thanks.
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(Please, only original characters) Enos is in his patrol car, waiting for someone to fine (something he doesn't like very much). But waiting is not so bad when he can read one of his comics. After reading comics, he yawns and he closes his eyes, falling asleep. (cue anyone)
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If you want to join in, I'm going to start a new round robin. I've not many ideas, but I'm going to try something. What 'bout to add pics in a round robin? Just an idea.
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When does this challenge end? Am I late? I'll try to write something, or I hope so.
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You're right, Roger. RPing requires a lot of time. For this reason I prefer Round Robin (so, even if I'm not connected, people can go on without waiting for my lines). I agree with DaisyMae, Val and Maryanne too. Everyone has a different way in RPing or RRing (as everyone has a unique way of writing fic), and not all styles match. RPing or RRing is like writing fic for me. I use the same style, and maybe not everyone likes it (it's a natural thing). I always try to build a story or write something that has a direction, and I don't like roaming, writing lines here or there by chance (especially if I don't know very well the story before joining in) . Anyway, I like very much RR, 'cause it gives me the chance to writing even if I've not a plot, or when I have an idea but it's not complete. Well, RRing is an alternative to writing fanfic when I'm confused 'bout a possible plot. I don't know if it's a right way to start a RR, but I like it.
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I'd like to RR with you and DaisyXEnos. I don't have an idea for a possible plot by now, but we may try something. I'm going to start a new RR this evening (afternoon for you, LOL), and I'd like you join it. Everyone is accepted; only a request: please, original characters (or ask me before to add created characters..... I like created characters, but not too much in a single story ).