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VICKI'S POV I feel like I'm walking thru a maze inside my dreams. I know that something is wrong, I can feel it. I am freezing, even though it is almost 80 degrees today. My lower stomach is hurting very bad. It feels like it could be my appendix, but I had ruptured it several years ago. It feels like it could be something else, but I don't know... I think that I have my eyes closed, but I don't know where I'm at. I think that I'm dreaming, thinking about my last minute working vacation less than a couple of months ago. It was a working vacation because I was working undercover with the FBI at the time. I could feel tears falling down my face when I remember what happened between my husband & I on our way home. We had a bad argument about him deciding to go back out on the NASCAR circuit. I continued walking through this maze. I could feel voices around me, but I don't know where they are coming from. Then out of the blue, I was walking through the shadows of the back of my mind into another dream. I ended up at my friend's apartment in Chickasaw. I can remember that it was only about 2 months ago when my friend Hughie Hogg was trying to make me feel better about Bo leaving for the NASCAR circuit. I remember crying loudly, but Hughie made me feel better. He told me that he would always be there for me, and he told me that I was his closest friend. I remember giving him a hug when he was comforting me about my husband & I separating. I felt better after talking to him, but it was only for a little while, until my husband & I reunited a few hours ago. Even though Hughie doesn't know about Bo returning, I can still cherish his friendship. I continue walking through the foggy maze in my mind. I don't know where I'm heading this time. I think that I see a bright light in front of me. As I continue walking towards the bright light, someone grabs my arm. Then I felt someone gently kissing me on the cheek. I could feel the warmth of flesh against flesh as someone was gently squeezing my hand, then hugging me, but I couldn't see who it was. I thought that I faintly heard Bo frantically trying to wake me up, telling me that our love for each other will turn back into our sweet past, back to when we were crazy teenagers in love. But, that was over 4 years ago...We have now been married just over a year. Frantically, I wanted to reach out and hold Bo against me, so I could feel his heart beating against mine, just like the last night we spent on the road while we were on vacation a few months ago. But as I tried to reach him, Bo disappeared from me, and my eyes were filling up with tears as I collapsed to the floor...
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I like the idea too about group therapy for writers! Maybe y'all can help me deal with my crazy character's problems that I have her in right now! Count me in, but I don't know what time I will be there this Saturday! I'm going bowling tonight with my husband! But I'll try to be on by 9:30 (Oklahoma/Central Time)! Y'all have a great day!
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Meanwhile, Vicki started moaning as she was being carried out of the General Lee by a frantic Bo & a worried Luke. "Oh...I don't feel too good," said Vicki moaning as she opened her eyes slowly as she was being carried out of the General Lee by Bo & Luke. "Sh...Sweet Angel. I'm glad you're awake! We just caught up with the ambulance," said Bo worriedly as he lightly gave Vicki a kiss on the cheek. Luke added brushing his hand against her forehead. "Oh...Lord! You're burning up with fever!" "How can I be burning up? I'm freezing..." said Vicki drowsily as her teeth start to chatter. "Honey, maybe this will make you feel better," said Bo, gently laying Vicki on the ground. He then took his jean jacket off and gently covered the redhead up with it. "I am starting to feel better..." said Vicki moaning as her voice trails off as 2 EMTs approached them. "I sure hope so, Sweet Angel..." said Bo, brushing a kiss to Vicki's forehead as she was being placed on the stretcher by one of the EMTs. Vicki smiled at Bo as she grasped his hand. "You're going to be taking me to the hospital?" she asked in a very weak voice as she was being placed in the ambulance. "Sweet Angel, I'm going to be with you forever," said Bo as he climbed into the back of the ambulance as the EMT handed him a clipboard to fill out. Vicki smiled at Bo for a second before she drifted out of consciousness. "Oh, No! Sweet Angel! Please don't die!" said Bo hysterically as he held Vicki's cold, lifeless hand then added as Luke walked up to them, "Luke! Get a hold of everyone and tell them to meet us at the hospital!"
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"Speedqueen, what do you mean that we have an officer down?" asked Sheriff Little into the CB mike as he turned onto Highway 76 North. "Sheriff, as me & Vicki were getting ready to arrest all 4 Duke boys, Vicki started staggering quite a bit. She kept saying that she was getting lightheaded & dizzy," said Katie worriedly into the CB. "Then what happened?" asked Rosco as he got in on the conversation as he & Cletus were heading towards the Chickasaw County line then added, "What is this about Vicki getting hurt?" "Rosco! Thank goodness that your on! Your god-daughter collasped when we were about to arrest all 4 Duke boys out just north of Mountain Creek Lake near the Hachapee County line," said Katie, letting out a sigh. Katie continued on. "When we walked up to the Dukes, I asked Vicki if she was all right, and she said that she was fine, so I left her talking to Coy & Vance while I was talking to Luke." "She was fine then?" asked Sheriff Little. "Well, Sheriff, maybe for a few minutes. When Bo walked up to her, Vicki started breathing heavily, and then she fainted," said Katie, worriedly. "Good Lord! Poor Princess!" said Hughie Hogg in shock as he butted into the conversation then added, "Sheriff Little or Rosco, I want y'all to arrest all those Dukes! They have put Vicki into the hospital!" "We'll see about that, Hughie!" said Sheriff Little. "I have to go, y'all! I think that we have finally caught up with the ambulance! Meet us Capital City Medical Center as soon as y'all can!" said Katie into the CB mike as she watched 2 EMTs rushing over to get an unconscious Vicki out of the General Lee...
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"Luke!" said Katie excitedly as she watched him head towards the driver's side of the General then added, "How's Vicki?" Luke's face looked quite grim. "Not real good. She came to for a minute, then she fainted again. I think that she went into shock. Since the ambulance isn't here, we're going to take Vicki to the hospital in Capital City ourselves." "Oh, my gosh!" said Katie excitedly then added to Coy & Vance, "Come on, fellas. We're going to the hospital." "Why?" asked Coy as he was getting into the backseat of the Chickasaw County patrol car. "Because, your cousin-in-law, my best friend just went into severe shock, and they need a police escort!" said Katie worriedly. "Oh, Lord! Poor Little Red! And all I wanted was for her to race us!" said Coy worriedly. "She'll have to race us later, cousin," said Vance as he opened the driver's side of the patrol car then added to Katie, "Since our cousin's life is at stake, let me drive. I can get us there in a hurry!" "Sure, Vance! And I'll call Sheriff Little, Rosco, and even Hughie Hogg on the CB and tell them the bad news about Vicki!" said Katie as she picked up the CB mike then added, "Breaker, Breaker. Anyone out there on the police channel? We have an officer down! Y'all please come back! This is Urgent!!"
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Assault & Battery
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While Bo was trying to free himself of the ropes, Luke, Vicki, & Daisy walked towards the barn. "That's funny. The barn door wasn't closed when I left Bo over an hour ago," said Luke, looking curiously at the barn door as he opened it. Vicki looked around inside the barn. Bo was no where to be seen. "Well, it looks like Bo didn't do a good job cleaning up in here. There is hay everywhere," said Vicki looking around the barn. "No! Wait a minute, Y'all!" said Luke excitedly then added, "Take a look at these tracks on the ground in front of us under the hay." "It looks like Bo was dragged off somewhere," said Daisy, trying to find the direction of the tracks. "The tracks look like they're heading towards the back of the barn," said Vicki as she noticed something shiny on the ground in the hay in front of her. Picking it up, she gasped in shock. Vicki realized it then that it was Bo's pocketknife. She knew then that they were on the trail to find Bo. "Hey, y'all! I found Bo's pocketknife on the ground." "That's great, Little Red! That means we're on the right track!" said Luke, smiling at the redhead then added, "Let's head towards the back of the barn." "I hope that we can find him before it's too late," said Daisy worriedly as she & Vicki followed Luke towards the back of the barn. Hearing Vicki's, Daisy's, and Luke's voices near the front of the barn, Bo started screaming through his gag, hoping that they would hear him. "Somebody, Help!" screamed Bo through his gag. Bo stopped screaming when he realized that he was having trouble getting his breath. "Someone HELP me! I can't breathe!" said Bo, through the gag as he was gasping for air. "Little Red, HELP!!!" Suddenly, Vicki stopped in her tracks as she heard Bo's muffled screaming from the back of the barn. She knew that Bo was in trouble. "What is it, Vicki?" asked Luke, looking curiously at the redhead. "I can hear Bo screaming for help. I think that he is in serious troble!" said Vicki in a furious voice as she, Luke, & Daisy started rushing towards the back of the barn. -
Moaning, Vicki shifted a little as Bo held her. "Sh...honey, don't move. The ambulance is on its way here." "I'm all right," said Vicki as she tried to sit up then added moaning, "I'm so dizzy...Why is my head spinning so bad?" "I don't know, honey," said Bo worriedly, looking around, hoping that the ambulance would get to them soon. "Something's wrong..." said Vicki, her voice drifting off, then added as she turned her head towards Bo "Everything is turning black...I love you, I don't want you to fade away from me..." Vicki then blacked out again. "Oh, Lord, NO!!" said Bo in a fearful voice as he picked Vicki up off the ground and started carrying her towards the General Lee. "What's going on??" asked Luke in a worried voice to Bo as he watched his cousin carry Vicki in his arms. "Luke!" said Bo in a fearful voice. "Help me get Vicki into the General carefully. We've got to get her to the hospital! She came to for a minute, but she fainted again and I can't wake her up!" "You got it, cousin! Don't you worry, we'll get her there!" said Luke as he & Bo carefully put the unconscious redhead in the backseat of the General.
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Assault & Battery
LittleRedVicki replied to LittleRedVicki's topic in Story Ideas/Fics In Progress/Collaborative Efforts
Meanwhile, near the back of the barn, Bo regains consciousness. "Where am I" thought Bo moaning as he opened his eyes slowly. He tried to look around, but couldn't because of something tied around his eyes. He knew then that he was blindfolded. He then try to yell, but he felt something sticky across his mouth. "Somebody, help!" screamed Bo, but all that came out was a muffled scream. He also felt straw around him, and knew that someone had covered him with straw. He tried to pull himself up to a sitting position, but realized that he couldn't. He was tied securely hand & foot. Moving clightly, he felt a box of somesort behind him. "I've got to get out of here! Before whoever did this to me comes back!" thought Bo, furiously as he began to pull on the ropes bounding him. He stopped pulling on the ropes after a few minutes when he realized that the ropes around his arms & hands seemed to tightened & bite into his skin, so he stopped moving. He then tried to reach with his numbed fingers behind him to his pocketknife, but to his horror, the knife was gone. "There is no way that I can move or yell for help," thought Bo as he tossed & turned effortlessly trying to break free of the ropes. As he was trying to free himself, Bo didn't know about the ticking sound behind him... -
"Bo! What happened to Vicki?" asked Luke as he & Katie rushed over to where Bo was kneeling on the ground, holding an unconscious Vicki in his arms. "I don't know, Luke! One minute she was talking to Coy & Vance, and the next minute, she fainted in my arms," said Bo worriedly as he showered Vicki's face with kisses then added, "Sweet Angel, please wake up! Don't die on me!!" "Y'all, the ambulance is on the way here! And I also called Rosco & Sheriff Little on the CB. They're going to meet us at the hospital," said Katie, looking worriedly at her friends then added, "I hope that Little Red will be all right!" "I'm sure that she will be all right," said Luke, smiling slightly at Katie. "How can you be so sure about that?" asked Vance as he & Coy walked over to them. "Vicki is about as white as your shirt, Luke!" said Coy worriedly as he watched Bo holding his young wife. Luke looked at Vicki's face. "Yeah, and that's not good either. I wonder what is wrong with her? She seemed fine this morning when I was talking to her..." Bo looked around, then looked at his watch. "Where are the ambulances? They should have been here by now! Vicki's pulse is getting weaker!" BALLADEER: I wonder what happened to the redhead? Could she have fainted at the sight of seeing her husband for the 1st time in 2 months? Or was it something else?? Only time will tell!!
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"Katie, I don't feel too good," moaned Vicki as she & Katie were walking towards the General Lee slowly. Katie gasped in shock at Vicki as she noticed the redhead turning very pale. "Vicki! Are you all right? You're white as a sheet!" "I don't know, Katie. Everything is spinning. I'm feeling real lightheaded all of a sudden." "Oh, no!!" said Katie, alarmed at the sudden change in events then added, "We've got to get you to a doctor!" "Katie, I'll be fine in a minute," said Vicki, breathing deeply. "Hi, Ladies. What's going on??" asked Luke as he, Coy, Vance, and Bo walked over to Katie and a trembling Vicki. "Nothing much, Luke," said Katie with a smile then added, "Unless you want to count us taking y'all to the Chickasaw Jail!" Luke laughed at Katie's remark. "Sounds like fun after y'all help us fix this tire!" While Katie was talking to Luke, Vicki was staring shyly at Coy & Vance. "Vicki, Bo was right! You have changed a lot since the last time I saw you!" said Vance as he hugged the redhead then added, "You're one heck of a deputy to pull us over like that!" "Sheriff Little must really depend on y'all! Y'all are too beautiful to be deputies," said Coy, grinning at Katie & Vicki. He then added to Vicki, "I guess that you can't chase me anymore like you did when we were kids!" Vicki giggled at Coy as Bo approached them, then she moaned, clutching her stomach. "Vicki, long time no see! Are you all right??" asked Bo, as he noticed that she was swaying a little. "I don't feel too good...Everything is turning black..." said the redhead, moaning. "Sweet Angel, are you okay?" asked Bo. Barely hearing what Bo said, Vicki fainted directly into his arms. "Sweet Angel! NO!!!" said Bo, frantically then hollered at Luke, "Luke, call Sheriff Little on the CB! Vicki's fainted!"
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In the General Lee, Bo was staring at Vicki out of the backseat as she & Katie was walking slowly towards them. "She still looks beautiful. Maybe I can talk her out of taking me to jail," he thought with a shock smile then added to Coy & Vance, "Y'all, we better get out. No telling what those ladies will do if we don't!" "Let's try to out run her! That little redhead can't catch us!" said Coy, laughing as he was getting out of the General. "Cousin," said Vance, placing his hand on Coy's arm, stopping him then added, "I don't think that she is the same little girl that we once played around with. She looks pretty mean to me! We better get out!" "Yeah, we have no choice now anyway! She shot out our back tire!" said Luke. "Maybe I can talk that beautiful deputy out of taking us to jail," said Bo as he was climbing out of the General. "Bo, I don't think that it is a good idea. She is still mad at you," said Luke, putting a hand on his cousin's arm. "Luke, once I talk to Vicki about the reason why I'm back here, maybe she won't decide to take us to jail!" said Bo as he was walking over towards Vicki & Katie with his arms raised in the air...
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"Katie, I don't know exactly how I feel right now," said Vicki as she was looking in her rear view mirror as she was taking off her seatbelt. "LittleRed, I can see it in your eyes. You do still have feelings for him. In fact, I think that you still love Bo," said Katie as she opened her car door. Vicki glanced away from Katie. "I don't know, Katie. I am still pretty angry with Bo about what he did to me a few months ago." "We'll talk more later, Vicki," said Katie with a smile. "Okay," said Vicki, sighing loudly. "Yep, Vicki still have feelings for him. I can see it through her sad eyes," thought Katie, smiling slightly then added to Vicki, changing the subject, "How many sets of handcuffs do you have? All I have is two sets with me." Vicki searched her patrol car. In the back seat she found 1 set of handcuffs and a thin long chain. "Just one set, Katie. But I found some chains." "A chain! What are we going to do with that chain?" asked Katie as she got out of the patrol car with her gun ready. "I have a pretty good idea on WHO I'm going to use it on," said Vicki, smiling meanly at Katie as she was dangling the chain in her hand.
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Vicki frowned as she noticed that Vance was speeding the General away from her. "That's very typical of a Duke," she muttered angrily then added, "It makes me think that it might be Bo driving up there instead of Vance!" "Vicki, you shouldn't say that! You're still a Duke! You used to drive like that when I was chasing you on your day off," said Katie. "Yeah, that was several months ago when I was still with Bo before he left to go back out on the NASCAR circuit!" said Vicki angrily as she followed Vance as he turned onto Silver Creek Road. "Oh...now I know why you moved out of Hazzard. To get away from your broken heart," asked Katie, looking at her best friend. "Bo is the main reason for my broken heart...maybe if he wouldn't have went out on the NASCAR circuit, we would still be together..." thought Vicki as she wiped a tear away from her face. "Even though sweet Hughie is helping me forget about my past, I will always have a broken heart." "But all Hughie is to you is a good friend," said Katie, putting a hand on her friend's arm, trying to comfort her. "Yeah, we listen to each other's problems, and we share a good friendship," said Vicki, sighing loudly. "But you still have feelings for him," said Katie, looking into the backseat of the General as Vicki was pulling up next to them. "Feelings for who?" asked Vicki, smiling meanly at Vance as she pulled side-by-side up next to him. "For him," said Katie, pointing into the backseat of the General. Vicki gasped in shock, staring into Bo's dark blue eyes as she forces the General Lee off the road...
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In the General Lee, Vance started moving all over the road from trying not to get shot by the redhead Chickasaw County deputy. Vicki fired again towards the General's tires. BANG!! "Wow! She has really changed!" said Coy as he glanced back at the speeding patrol car. "You're telling me, cousin! She's as mean as Sheriff Little!" said Vance, swerving across the road. "She seemed all right to me this morning when I was talking to her," said Luke, looking back at the patrol car then added, "What has gotten into her??"
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Near Mountain Creek Lake, Sheriff "Big Ed" Little picks up the CB mike. "Good Afternoon, LadyRed. What's up? Come back." "Hi, Sheriff. I was just going to tell you that I'm chasing the Duke Boys as we speak," said Vicki into the CB mike. "That's good, little lady. You've gotten really good at chasing those Duke boys, and catching them too!" said Sheriff Little laughing into the CB mike then added, "Where are you at right now?" "I'm about 5 miles north of Chickasaw on Highway 411," said Vicki into the CB mike. "Vicki, do you want me to set up a road block?" asked Sheriff Little. "No, I think that I'm going to be just fine chasing them, besides I have Katie riding with me," said Vicki with a smile. "That's good, little lady. I know that you ladies can handle them now," said Sheriff Little with a laugh. "Thanks, Sheriff. As we speak, I'm bumping my patrol car into the General Lee's back bumper, trying to force them off the road," said Vicki, frowning as she noticed Vance Duke speeding the General up a little more. Sheriff Little laughed into the CB mike. "Vicki, you're becoming just as mean as me. I love that new aggressive attitude that you have!" "Thanks Sheriff, Hold on for a minute," said Vicki, taking her gun out of her purse as she was driving. She then fired a shot towards the General's tires. BANG!! In the General Lee, Bo's dark blue eyes lit up a little after hearing Vicki's beautiful, but furious voice. "How is she going to feel when she sees me again?" thought Bo, looking behind him as Vicki fired a shot towards them...
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RedHead's Comment Page
LittleRedVicki replied to LittleRedVicki's topic in Story Ideas/Fics In Progress/Collaborative Efforts
I recently made some major changes on the story, my character Vicki becoming more aggressive, and this page! This is a page about Vicki's wild side! 8) I hope that y'all like the title and the way I changed my character around! I hope that it works out for y'all in later stories in the future! 8) Check out earlier posts on this page on recent changes to my character & her friends from Chickasaw County! More to come later from The Rebellious RedHead! Y'all have a great night! -
"Katie, does Big Ed know what we're doing right now?" asked Vicki as she speeded her patrol car up a little more. "No, Why?" asked Katie as she glanced in front of her at the fleeing General Lee. "Well, we better call him. I don't want him to be surprised when I haul 3 Duke Boys off to jail in handcuffs," said Vicki giggling meanly as she picked up the CB mike then added, "This is LadyRed calling Chickasaw Terror, are you there, Sheriff? Come back!" **BALLADEER: Y'all, things aren't looking to good! Can you believe that this wild redhead is as mean as Sheriff Little??
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Katie looked wide-eyed at Vance. "He's handsome," she thought then added to Vicki, "Who's that driving the General Lee? It's certainly not Bo & Luke!" "That's some old friends of mine, they are also my cousin-in-laws Coy & Vance Duke," said Vicki giggling as she yelled back at Vance, "You're on! I bet that I can catch you now!" Coy Duke hollered out the General, "How about a race then, Little Red? I want to see if you are really as good as you used to be when you used to chase us!" Vicki giggled as she & Katie were getting into her patrol car. She then picked up the CB mike. "You guys sure haven't changed much since the last time I saw y'all! We'll race to the Chickasaw/Hazzard County line and if I win, y'all have to spend the night in handcuffs at the Chickasaw County Jail for speeding, evading police officers, and for reckless driving." "We'll see about that, Little Red," said Vance, laughing into the CB mike then added to Coy and Luke as they were heading out of town, "Is she bluffing?" "I don't think so, cousin! I think that she's serious!" said Coy as he looked back at the speeding patrol car. "No way! She knows all these back roads like a book!" said Luke. "Yeah, only because I taught her every shortcut here in Chickasaw County and in Hazzard County," said Bo sarcastically then added as he looked behind him at the speeding patrol car, "If she recognizes me in here with y'all, we're all in big trouble! Step on it, Vance! She's gaining on us!" "Sure thing, Bo," said Vance as he stepped on the gas. Bo looked behind him as Vicki lightly nudged her patrol car into the back of the General Lee. He knew then that this wasn't the best time to come home to talk to the rebellious redhead...
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Made some changes to my fanfic character Vicki's biography! I hope that y'all like the changes! I think now that the changes fit y'alls storylines better! Y'all are more than welcome to borrow my fanfic character Vicki anytime! Just make sure that you look at her background first! Take Care Y'all!
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Assault & Battery
LittleRedVicki replied to LittleRedVicki's topic in Story Ideas/Fics In Progress/Collaborative Efforts
Trembling, Daisy sank down in a kitchen chair and began to wept. "Cousin, are you okay?" asked Luke, putting his arm around Daisy. He noticed that she was pale, and there was a look of terror in her eyes. "I don't know," said Daisy, with fear in her voice then added, "I keep thinking about what the voice said into the phone." "I feel the same way, Daisy," said Vicki as she sat down in a chair next to her friend then added, "I am so scared about what the voice said on the phone too." Looking at Vicki, Pam gasped in shock at her sister. "What did the voice say to you?" "Well, he said it to Daisy, but it was addressed to me," said Vicki, trembling slightly. "Who was on the phone?" asked Luke, giving Daisy a hug. "I don't know...It was just a harsh mean voice telling me that we would..." said Daisy as she started to shake again as the sound of that voice echoed in her mind. Luke gently touched Daisy's shoulder and squeezed it. "It's okay, Daisy. We won't let anything happen to you." Daisy touched Luke's hand and smiled at him for a minute before remembering the last thing that the voice said before she hung up the phone. After looking at a worried Vicki, Daisy rose out of her chair. "The voice also said that he left a surprise for Vicki inside the barn, and I bet that it has something to do with Bo!" Vicki's blue-gray eyes grew wide with worry. "I wonder how the voice knew about me?" asked the redhead to Luke in a fearful voice. "I don't know, Little Red," said Luke, putting his arm around Vicki's shoulder, trying to calm her down then added as he opened the back kitchen door, "Maybe you'll feel better after we take a look out in the barn for Bo. Let's go!" -
Assault & Battery
LittleRedVicki replied to LittleRedVicki's topic in Story Ideas/Fics In Progress/Collaborative Efforts
"WATCH YOUR BACK! YOU & YOUR FAMILY WILL GET HURT!" said Jasper harshly into the pay phone. Daisy couldn't believe what she was hearing. She could feel that this person was serious. "Who is this??" asked Daisy fearfully. There was a harsh laugh in the phone. "I'M NOT GOING TO TELL YOU. YOU WILL KNOW THAT SOON ENOUGH!" There was some more harsh laughs in the background of the phone. Then Jasper came back on the line. "BY THE WAY, I'VE LEFT YOUR FRIEND A SURPRISE IN THE BARN OR WHAT'S LEFT OF HER SURPRISE! HAVE A GOOD DAY!" Daisy began to tremble as she hung up the phone. She then broke down sobbing loudly. Vicki's eyes grew wide with fear as she hung up the phone in the kitchen. Looking out the window, Vicki began to worry about what the voice said on the phone about her surprise... -
Assault & Battery
LittleRedVicki replied to LittleRedVicki's topic in Story Ideas/Fics In Progress/Collaborative Efforts
As everyone was going outside to start searching for Bo, the phone rings in the kitchen. Luke went to answer the phone. "Hello," said Luke as he answered the phone on the 3rd ring. "Hi," said Jasper in a cool voice into a pay phone then added, "Is Daisy there please?" "Sure, hold on for a minute," said Luke quizzingly then added to Daisy, "Daisy, it's for you." Daisy walked into the living room and picked up the phone. "Hello." There was silence. "Hello?" She said again, still there was silence. Vicki picked up the extension in the kitchen when she noticed that there was something wrong. "Hello?" said Daisy a third time. After the third time, Daisy was about to hang up when a deep voice came over the line. "WATCH YOUR BACK, OR YOUR FAMILY WILL GET HURT!!!" -
Sounds good to me, Val! I am certainly enjoying writing with y'all in the Beginning! It is really becoming an interesting story!
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Hey y'all! I like all of y'alls characters! Let's get all our characters together into one big story in the future after we finish our current stories! Sounds good to y'all??
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Vicki sighed happily as she watched Hughie walk across the street into the Boarding House. "Vicki, are you all right?" asked Katie as she noticed her friend with a dreamy expression on her face. "I don't know. I think that I feel happy right now," said Vicki giggling slightly. "Is it because "Big Ed" is letting you run Chickasaw County now? Or is it because of Hughie?" asked Katie giggling. Before Vicki could answer, Vance Duke yelled out the driver's side window of the General Lee as they passed by the Chickasaw County Deputies, "Hey! Little Red! Do you want to chase me again?" BALLADEER: Y'all, I hope that the redhead is in a good mood! Wait until she sees who is in the backseat of the General Lee with Luke! I'd bet that it makes her blood start boiling!