DaisyMaeDuke
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So...My result was 20...that either makes me a superfan or a person with a baaaaad obsession....LOL
and he either gets a kick outta me or would like to kick me out...not sure which
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nah...Rog and I don't fight... I was taught to respect my ELDERS (or in his case the much elder;))
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*feet tapping along with Dukefan* Rog is old...as such it takes him a while...you got your spectacles on Uncle Roger? Maybe thats whats taking so long...he can't make out the keys!
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Tillie (as in BlackTillie)
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I love that episode!!!!! LOL
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sweet....
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I agree
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Luke nodded with a sigh. "Thank you, ma'am." With that he slowly made his way back to Zack's window. He knew that the little boy didn't seem to want him there, but Luke just couldn't leave him there alone.
"Hey...I'm back..." he offered as he sat down beside him.
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Minewas the first birthday wish on the official birthday thread...I feel so special
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Luke swallowed hard. He never did like it when someone he cared about was hurting. Now Zackwas hurting, and Luke had no idea how to fix it. "There's got to be somethin'"
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Luke swallowed. "How can I help him?" He remembered what it was like for himself so many years ago...waiting every week for his parents to magically reappear...waiting to wake up from a very bad nightmare. He didn't wish that on anyone...especially Zack.
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"I was wondering about Zack...he seems...depressed....I mean...really really down...." He ran his hand through his hair uneasily. "Did I...do somethin?"
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I've read through this thread and thought about it....so now I guess I will throw in my two cents...
I admit...I have used one-liners before...I really try not to, but sometimes it makes for a smooth transition so the other person can continue....and my one liners tend to be more than three or four words... As Mary Anne said, there may be on occasion a time when something like that is needed...as my aunt used to say, "There should be a place for everything and everything in its place."
For me though, I take my writing very seriously...I am choosy about who I write with, who I RP with and even the stories I read. I am definately not easy to please. I am a teacher after all...As such, if I see a story that is one liner after one liner, or jumps from one thought to another, it drives me crazy. It just makes for poor writing...the readers get bored...and chances are...when you do so many one liners, the "flow" is not there, making it very hard to read.
Don't get me wrong, I am by no means a writing expert. But I have written enough to know what makes for a good story, and constant one liners do not. Besides...I think Hazzardnet is a quality site...I think the admin strives to keep quality high on the threads and with the members. I think the fan fics andd rrs should be no exception to that.
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J'ai un bon anniversaire merci...nous sommes aller au restaurant-tres bien!
(I speak French also Duke fan...well un peu de francais!)
I went out to lunch with friends earlier, than tonight I went out to dinner with my hubby....he got me two charms for my Pandora bracelet...
My dad lives in the Philipines but he wished me a happy bday, as did my wonderful big brother and many friend...including the ones on here! The night ended with Chocolate cake with oodles of hot fudge all over it...a day ending in chocolate cannot be bad! I also bought myself two early bday Superchick with my daughter and tickets of seeing Tom in concert in December with a friend....so my birthday technically aint over and the best is yet to come.
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That is so sweet...what a nice idea...thank you!
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Luke swallowed, biting his lip. Nodding a little, he stood to his full height. "Guess...I'll see you later then..." he said softly, his voice breaking a little. Maybe he was wrong...maybe Zack didn't want him after all.
He decided to seek out the lady in charge. "Scuse me...can you tell me what's wrong with Zack? He's so upset..."
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fairgrounds
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Luke looked at him before kneeling down beside him putting a gentle hand on his back, rubbing small circles on it. "Zack you can talk t' me...I'll listen..."
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Luke swallowed hard. It was like this little boy and Zack were two different persons. He wasn't sure what to do. "You...want me to go?" he asked softly, afraid that even saying something too loudly might push the youngster further away.
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Old Mill Road
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Ernie Ledbetter!
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Dukes Superfan Challenge
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:0 Where is Maudine when you need her?! If anyone deserves a kick it's you!!!!