Betsyraeduke

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My first fanfic. ever. It's called, "Welcome to Our Family, Betsy-rae. It's posted in the, 'story ideas/fics in progress forum'. Please read and post your thoughts in the feedback forum.

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"Yeeehaawww! Let's go home." Bo exclaimed. Betsy-rae laughed. Uncle Jessie walked over to Betsy-rae, smiling, he took her hand and led her out of the building and to Daisy's jeep in the parking lot, as Bo, Luke and Daisy followed. Looking down at Betsy-rae, Uncle Jessie spoke the words which they were all thinking. "Welcome to our family, Betsy-rae." And that's the story of how little miss Betsy-rae Beaudry became little miss Betsy-rae Duke. Now isn't that nice, y' all?

Daisy stood up and taking Betsy-rae by the hand, she pulled her slightly so that Betsy-rae stood as well. Daisy gave her a hug and said, "See, I told you it'd be alright." Walking over to them and placing his arm around Betsy-rae's waists, Luke says, "Yep. you're a full fledged Duke now"

That being done, J.D. waved good-bye to the Dukes and the other's whom were in the courtroom and hurried off, hungry for his mid-morning snack. Betsy-rae smiled broadly when she heard J.D. 's decision. This was the best thing which had ever happened to her. She would finally have a real family. A family who cared about her. She would never have to suffer from her daddy's abuse again. She wouldn't have to be afraid any more. It felt wonderful, absolutely wonderful.

"Well, as county commissioner and Judge of Hazzard County, I do have the right! And it is my decision that custody of Betsy-rae goes to Jesse Duke! Further more, you, sir is going to the slammer for, oh, say 15 or 20 years for abusing that poor girl! And I'm going to have my deputy pick up your wife who will be doing some time of her own in the slammer for her part in all of this." Turning to Rosco, Boss ordered that Mr. Beaudry be taken and booked and handing him a warrant for the arrest of Mrs. Beaudry, he instructed Rosco to have Enos pick her up and book her as well.

Boss Hogg had Rosco bring Mr. Beaudry back into the room and ordered Mr. Beaudry to approach the bench. J.D. then questioned him briefly. "Alright, Mr. Beaudry, what have you got to say?" "I ain't gots nothin' ta say ta ya. It ain't none of yers business how I raise my kids. That dang Jesse Duke ain't gots no rights intaferin' either!"

Returning to her seat between Bo and Daisy, Betsy-rae, let out a deep sigh and shuddered. Daisy smiled encouragingly at her and squeezed her hand. "It's going to be alright, sugar." "Of course it will." Bo said in agreement with Daisy as he put his arm around Betsy-rae and warmly embraced her.

J.D., mortified by the girl's testimony, as was everyone else in the room, placed his hand on Betsy-rae's shoulder and spoke softly. "Ok, dear, you done real good. You don't need to say anything more. I have heard enough. You may step down now."

"When I don't do what they want, my mama tells me that I ain't no kid of hers. She says I ain't fit ta be a Beaudry and she can't believe she got cursed with........with a no good, no account like me fer a daughter. And my daddy......my daddy lashes me with......with horse whips and boards, some times the boards have nails in them, and........he kicks me, and..........."

"Please continue, child, what happens when you don't do what they ask?" Betsy-rae takes a deep breath as she prepares to speak. All of this is a little harder than she thought it'd be, but she knows that she must do it if she is to get away from her folks and into a better place.