LoriDavenport Posted September 22, 2008 Report Share Posted September 22, 2008 Here is where you can tell Garrett and myself, what you like, don't like, and what we can do, as writers, to improve on the story. Hope you guys enjoying reading as we enjoying writing it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DixieDavenport Posted September 28, 2008 Report Share Posted September 28, 2008 It is a good story so far --- hope to see more soon. I can understand Bo's problem being worried about Luke and all. Keep up the good work!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julieduke Posted September 29, 2008 Report Share Posted September 29, 2008 It is a good story so far --- hope to see more soon. I can understand Bo's problem being worried about Luke and all. Keep up the good work!!I hope they work it out pretty soon, it's really story as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dukefan Posted January 26, 2009 Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 I appreciate ya showing me where to leave my comments Lori , thank you!as I said, the way you two write this story is perfect, a lot of detailed descriptions in this story, and the continuing flow between you and Garrett is awesome. There is suspense, there is curiosity and best of all true to the ways of the dukes.I mean, it gives the reader imagination to what could happen next, ideas of what will take place, yet keeps us hanging and wanting to read more.I love that about this story, you had us hooked from the beginning, it was so sad, yet unbelievable that such drama could have taken place between the dukes over a stranger, yet gave us the need to read more if we are to get to the bottom of this story.I love it, now we have to see how they deal with it, together as a family once more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dukefan Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 Hey Lori, Hey garrett, what's the hold up, you got us hanging here...lol Get on with it, more writing please...lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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