June 14, 200521 yr It's good, but it's hard to understand. You have some grammer mistakes.Other wise it's ok.
June 16, 200521 yr I like it. It has some spelling mistakes, but the story is cool. Rosco as Luke's father, has a star wars twist (kinda). But with the spelling, I put my stories, in microsoft word, then run a spell check, then I cut and paste the story. If you need any help with the story, I ran into a roadblock with mine so I can help.
June 16, 200521 yr Hello Y'all!Good job on the new story! Keep up the great work on your writing!Take Care!Vicki
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