Kay Darleen Duke
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I'll stop hounding you for updates I'll just wait for you to add more.
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a couple weeks later Luke starts to feel better and his memory is coming back", and his virus is on it's way out he is on the road to recovery from now on. Bo was the first up this morning so he thought he would wake Luke up", " hey Luke wake up it's morning ", " Luke said " Bo .. were cousin's right ?", Bo said " yeah we are and Daisy is our cousin too and you have a brother ". Luke said " wait a minute i have a brother how come i didn't know about this ?', " Luke you met him just don't remember he is your younger brother". you hungry for some breakfast Luke ?", Luke said " i could go for something. So the boys made their way into the kitchen were Daisy was making bacon, eggs, and toast and she said " hey Boys are you ready for some breakfast ", Luke said " sure i just love a country breakfast it all smells really good daisy. So Daisy fixed Luke's plate first which was bacon , Eggs , toast , potatoes. Then after breakfast the boys decided to do Chores Luke was making up", for all of the times he was in the hospital in that bad coma now he was back. Cue Elly Mae Duke
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So later on that day Bo brought Luke home in the General and felt happy to be home but he was trying to piece to together stuff but so far nothing ", Bo asked him " well cuz do you remember anything living on the farm ?. Luke said " i ... don't really know yet this is a nice house though Bo ", I do remember being in a race of some kind with you bunch of other guys. Bo said " well that could be the Nascar Circuit that we were on years ago ", Luke said " um... i guess that could be it i don't really remember much . Then Uncle Jesse said " well Luke it's gonna take time you just woke up", your body will be okay you'll remember stuff your body is recovering still. Luke said " I'm starting to feel a little sleepy i think i'm gonna go take a rest. So while Luke was taking a nap Bo was a little concerned about Luke ", " Uncle Jesse do you think Luke'll ever be the same again cause i'm worried. Jesse said " Bo.. Luke will be good as new in a few weeks he just needs time. As Luke was sleeping he was having some weird dreams almost flashbacks about riding in the car with Bo , and being chased by a cop car ", then Luke started to see a strange dream about a car accident ",. he could faintly see a little baby in the backseat he had no idea about it. Meanwhile in the kitchen Jesse was frying a chicken while daisy did taters , Bo was husking the corn on the cob for supper ", Bo was gonna wake Luke when supper was ready but until then Luke needed a the rest he could get.
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Luke's nurse came in to check on him and was shocked to see him awake ", "welcome back Luke you was a asleep for long time now which is great news, Luke gave the nurse a funny look on account of he doesn't remember anything. So Luke's nurse decided to check his fever and noticed that it was cooler now", then she checked his IV bag and it seemed to be half full which is good too So the she left and reported to Luke's doctor to tell her the good news also. Once she left Luke gave Bo a funny look like he didn't know who he was . Luke tried to talk but his speech was a little messy " who are you ?", Bo said " Luke it's me Bo your cousin , Daisy too and your Luke Duke. Luke said " i... don..'t k..now you all i don't remember who is Luke Duke", Luke's doctor came in all smiles and said " Luke I'm so happy your awake ". Bo asked the doctor why in the heck Luke can't remember who he is or us. the doctor said " I'm willing to bet that it is from being in the coma for long, " his memory should return eventually just treat him like you would any day". she checked his fever it seemed cooler but he wasn't all the way well yet", Bo asked Luke's doctor if they could take Luke home said said that's fine with me but he'll still need to take it easy , get plenty of bed rest , no fooling around.
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I promise I'll stop bugging you for good cause i would never want you to stop posting it to the website ", and i did research before i
posted this story it is just that i guess i got some facts wrong.
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Kay,
you have obviously not done any research for this latest story of yours. How can you write about something you don't know a thing about?! What websites have you gone to to learn that one bad seizure lasts 4 hours?! And what doctors told you that you turn a persons whole body to the side when they have seizures?! Ridiculous. Seizures and epilepsy are not things that you can just randomly write about and embelish to suit your needs in a story!!! If you MUST put Luke through things like that to get your angst jollies, then at least have the decensy to do some research so that you don't misrepresent the disorder! It is very offensive...especially given the fact that seizures and epilepsy are so misunderstood anyway. There is no excuse for it, except maybe laziness on your part.
Also, Stop harassing me about when I will update my story!!! I'm flattered that people like it so much, but really...I just moved to another town...I work full time...I have a family...updating my story so that you have something to read for 5 minutes is NOT my first priority!!!!! I am very very tired of asking you to stop. It makes me not want to post anymore of the story period. If you do not stop hounding me about it, I will withdraw my story of ffnet and send it out only to those who respect me and my schedule.
I have tried to be nice about these two things before, but I guess being nice just doesnt work with you, so now I am just flat out telling you...
Stop Harassing Me!!!!
Research BEFORE You write!!!
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So later on that night when Bo went to visit Luke he still looked the same, but he figured that Luke would've woken up by now so he sat by Luke's side. And he picked up his hand and said " Luke i don't know if you can hear me", " but i really wish that you could wake up and talk to me cause i miss you. Then all of sudden out of the blue Luke starts making a moan he tries to open his eyelids started to flutter some and he tried to say something but he can't. so he just said layed their and opened his eyes and he was back for now. Then Bo said " Luke your awake oh my god " " Luke you okay ", talk to me", since the oxygen mask was still on him he couldn't talk so he just blinked.
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After i finish this one I'm gonna be doing one about the Boars Nest on fire ".
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Did you know that Tom's parents names were Raeann , Carl .
I think those are nice names and he is the fifth boy of seven.
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Like maybe he would have to relearn eating , talking , dressed.
Bo feels like Luke will never be the same he tries to be brave.
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I was thinking that after i add another post tonight , too,
after i was thinking Luke could wake up when Bo is with him.
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Like maybe he would have to relearn eating , talking , dressed.
Bo feels like Luke will never be the same he tries to be brave.
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Of course and maybe he could have some other effects like maybe some kind of mental issue or maybe some paralysis. . .maybe.
