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Bo was at it again there he was. In the General, chasing yet another woman. It was raining that day and the roads were slick.

But Bo didn’t mind the rain even though it was coming through the window of the General. Luke was out of town in Chickasaw for a car show that Bo decided to skip so he was alone for the weekend.

Bo would get close to her bumper and she would speed ahead of him. Bo kept right at it until they got to the Boars Nest where they both turned off. When she climbed out of the car he realized she wasn’t from Hazzard. She was a beautiful blue-eyed, blonde, bombshell. She was about Luke’s height with football player shoulders and a body full of magnificent curves and a face full of hypnotizing features. He decided to go for it no matter what it took he wanted to make her his girlfriend. He hopped in front of her to open the door leading inside.

“Thank ya darlin.†She said, she had the thickest southern accent he had ever heard.

“You’re welcome friend.†Bo said.

“What’s your name?†She asked Bo.

“My names Beauregard, but please call me Bo.†Bo said.

“My name is Madison but call me Madi.†Madi said.

“Oh by the way, it’s karaoke night. You look like someone with a nice singing voice. I would like it if you would sing somethin.†Bo said, putting a hand on her shoulder.

“I just might sing for you. Only if you promise to get up there and sing with me after I sing you a song.†Madi said.

“I promise. What’re ya’ gonna sing first?†Bo asked.

“You’ll see†Madi said as she walked up the stage, Bo took a seat in the first row as she began to sing.

“Lead guitar? Give me the song “I walk the line†by Johnny Cash.†Madi said, re- adjusting the microphone to her height.

Her voice melted over Bo’s heart like butter at the 100 degree mark. When she sang she sounded like a bird and looked hotter than a two dollar pistol, with a voice like Donna Fargo.

“I keep a close watch on this heart of mine

I keep my eyes wide open all the time

I keep the ends out for the tie that binds

Because you're mine, I walk the lineâ€

I find it very, very easy to be true

I find myself alone when each day's through

Yes, I'll admit that I'm a fool for you

Because you're mine, I walk the line

As sure as night is dark and day is light

I keep you on my mind both day and night

And happiness I've known proves that it's right

Because you're mine, I walk the line

You've got a way to keep me on your side

You give me cause for love that I can't hide

For you I know I'd even try to turn the tide

Because you're mine, I walk the line

I keep a close watch on this heart of mine

I keep my eyes wide open all the time

I keep the ends out for the tie that binds

Because you're mine, I walk the lineâ€

When she was finished she stood in the shocked silence. Suddenly, Bo started to clap and everyone else followed suit whooping and cheering out for an encore.

“Okay, Okay, settle down. I am now goin to sing a duet with a certain man that promised me a duet. Hazzard County’s own Beauregard or, Bo Duke!†Madi said, a wide smile spreading across her full featured face. When she smiled she had a great set of teeth, Bo smiled back but felt stupid.

“And we’re gonna sing ‘Like we never loved At all.†Madi said.

“You never looked as good as you did last night,

underneath the city lights.

There walking with your friend, laughing at the moon.

I swear you looked right through me.

But I'm still living with your goodbye,

and you're just going on with your life.†Madi sang, looking at Bo.

“How can you just walk on by without one tear in your eye?

Don't you have the slightest feelings left for me?

Maybe that's just your way of dealing with the pain,

forgetting everything between our rise and fall,

like we never loved at all.†They both sang together.

“I hear you're doing fine;

Seems like you're doing well,

As far as I can tell.

Time,

is leaving us behind,

another week has passed,

and still I haven't laughed yet.

So tell me, what your secret is, baby

To letting go, letting go like you did,

like you did.†Bo sang, looking into Madi’s eyes with an evident love.

“How can you just walk on by without one tear in your eye?

Don't you have the slightest feelings left for me?

Maybe that's just your way of dealing with the pain,

forgetting everything between our rise and fall,

like we never loved at all.†They both sang again.

“Did you forget the magic?†Bo sang.

â€Did you forget the passion?†Madi sang back.

†And did you ever miss me?†Bo sang to her.

â€Ever long to kiss me?†Madi sang at him the two were getting closer together.

“Maybe that's just your way of dealing with the pain,

forgetting everything between our rise and fall,

like we never loved at all†Madi and Bo sang as they ended the song with a very romantic and passionate kiss.â€

The crowd was shocked yet again, and Enos broke the silence, with cheering and clapping for more just like before.

“I don’t think –“Madi got cut off by another unexpected kiss from Bo that she didn’t refuse. She knew that there was a love between the two of them that was not just a summer or a short time deal that they really loved each other. This kiss wasn’t just another attempt to make her his it was real. It had passion, love, romance, tongue, (lots and lots of tongue!)

So there they were, on stage, making out, in front of all of Hazzard County and they didn’t even care. Every one saw.

“Okay, maybe one more. Whatcha say Bo?†Madi asked, pleading with her eyes for him to say yes.

“Why not. What’re we gonna sing?†Bo asked.

“We’re gonna sing Whiskey Lullaby.â€

“She put him out like the burning end of a midnight cigarette.

She broke his heart: He spent his whole life trying to forget.

We watched him drink his pain away, a little at a time,

but he never could get drunk enough to get her off his mind,

until the night:

He put that bottle to his head and pulled the trigger.

And finally drank away her memory.

Life is short, but this time it was bigger,

than the strength he had to get up off his knees.

We found him with his face down in the pillow,

With a note that said: "I'll love her till I die." Bo sang,staring into her eyes again with the same love.

â€And when we buried him beneath the willow,

the angels sang a whiskey lullaby. “They both sang this line.

â€La la la la la la la

La la la la la la la.

La la la la la la la,

La la la la la la laâ€. Then they sang together again

“The room was full but nobody knew how much she blamed herself.

For years and years, she tried to hide the whiskey on her breath.

She finally drank her pain away, a little at a time,

But she never could get drunk enough to get him off her mind.

Until the night:

She put that bottle to her head and pulled the trigger.

And finally drank away his memory.

Life is short, but this time it was bigger,

than the strength she had to get up off her knees.

We found her with her face down in the pillow,

clinging to his picture for dear life.

We laid her next to him beneath the willow,

while the angels sang a whiskey lullaby.

â€La la la la la la la

La la la la la la la.

La la la la la la la,

La la la la la la la.

La la la la la la la

La la la la la la la.

La la la la la la la,

La la la la la la la.†They said finishing the song. And kissed again. This time they stood there and kissed for a little bit then, Bo picked her up and carried her outside then sat her down on the hood of the General Lee.

“Ooooohhhhhh, challenger orange, confederate flag, start er up I want to heart the motor.†Bo did as she said.

When the engine started, she just sat there and said,

“That reminds me of when I get out my racing car out. But no doubt yours has a lot bigger engine.†Madi said. Bo flipped the engine off and they went back to kissing, then something made Bo stop,

“I love you Madi.†Bo said.

“I love you to Bo. I can tell you’re different than everyone else. I’ve never sang with someone and fallen in love, I’ve never been in love before, except for a few race car drivers and I only dated a few of them.†Madi said.

After that sat and stared at each other and they got closer with every breath they took.

“So, Bo how old are you. I’m 21 today.†Bo said.

“Today is your birth-day? And you ain’t out celabratin’?â€

“No, but now I am legally old enough to drink. But I won’t.â€

“Well I’m 21 also but I turned 21, two days ago.â€

“We’re only two days apart. You’re the man the fortune teller told me about when she read my palm. She said we would meet at an unexpected time and place, she also said we would have no children and you would have a fast car with orange paint. She also said we would get into some trouble soon after we met with a guy named Roscoe.â€

“That’s the sheriff and lord wouldn’t you know it, here he comes. Get ready to witness some major stupidity.â€

“All right, all right I gotcha. Freeeaze.†Roscoe said.

“What now Roscoe?†Bo asked.

“I gotcha for making out in public, and your car has a broken tail-light Bo Duke.†Roscoe said.

“I’ll make a scene.†Madi said.

“Now Bo will you and your nice girl-friend get in my patrol car before I gotta sick Flash on ya’?†Roscoe asked.

“Bo’s girlfriend you thought for one minute that I was dating such scum? For your information we’re not. He paid me twenty crisp one dollar bills to make out with him.â€

“You two are still goin to jail.†Roscoe said. “Now put your hands up so I can cuff you and stuff you.â€

“Wow, those are some nice hand-cuffs you got there. Can I see em?†Madi asked.

“Sure, but don’t scuff um none, ya’ hear?†Roscoe asked.

“I sure do. Hey could you lift up your arms and turn in a circle so I can see all of the stuff on your belt. Oh and I want to see the siren and the lights

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Madi said. While Roscoe was turning, she cuffed his hands behind his back.

“Ha-ha, let’s get.†Bo said.

“Make tracks.†Madi said. Climbing in through the windows of her own car doors she raced off behind Bo. Then she radioed him.

“Hey Bo, I’m sorry to say that I gotta go as soon as we reach the sweet-water line.†Madi said over the C.B.

“Why are you leaving?†Bo asked.

“I was just passin’ through. I’m on my way to Nashville to try out for this record deal somebody offered me.†Madi said.

“I thought we were meant for each other?†Bo asked.

“And I know that we were made for each other. But I also know that I was made to go to Nashville and sing for my living. I’m sorry.â€

“I love you very much. And your voice melts over my heart like butter every time you sing.†Bo said.

“I love you more than all the stars in the sky and all the people on the planet, but I have to do this. There’s the county line I’m sorry Bo, if you’re ever in Nashville look me up. My number is 214-798.â€

Bo sat at the county line and watched the little black road-runner with the neon green pin striping melt into the scenery.

“Good bye beautiful.†Madi said.

Madi drove her car watching the General melt away into the horizon through the rear view mirror.

“Good by Bo.†Madi said as she began to cry but she kept driving towards Nashville at her chance of a lifetime.

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Two Years later...

“Hello?†Someone answered. “May I speak to Madison Lillibridge?†Bo asked. “She moved out a year ago to a mansion. I’d be happy to give you the number if you would like?†The woman asked.

“I would like that. Thank you.†Bo said

“214-99909. Got it?†The lady asked impatiently.

“Yes mamn’. Thank you.†Bo said calling the number the strange woman had given him.

â€Hello?â€Bo asked. “Bo? Is it really you?†Madi said.

“It’s me all right. I’m up here for a race and I got an extra ticket. I was thinking’ maybe you would want to come.†Bo said.

“I would love that. We could make a weekend of it.†Madi said.

“I heard you on the radio and the announcer said it was Madi McIntyre with her new hit Hazzard county and I knew it was you.â€

“I got married, then divorced cause he didn’t love me as much as you do- er, um did love me.†Madi said.

“I still love you with as much love is in me.†Bo said.

“Oh you sweet-talkin thing you. I think about you every day and dream about you every night.†Madi said.

“Well, right now I’m lookin’ for a hotel.†Bo said.

“Well quit lookin and come stay with me sexy.†Madi said.

“I couldn’t-“Bo was cut off.

“Of course you can. My address is 1245Weeping Willow drive. You gotta drive up a mile long tree-line drive- way to get there.â€

“I got it. Thanks.†Bo said.

“Oh it’s no big deal I live in a mansion.†Madi said. â€I love you.â€

"Ilove you too." bo said

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