This is my first fan fic so be nice, don't go postal on me

WOW! I really like it!!!! I can't wait to read the next post!

Don't be afraid ta comment I can take it, good or bad!!

Nice character dialouge. Unique style with script type for characters speaking. The written out action/place of event is like balladeer comment in an episode.

Good story so far =)

Daney

That's because I'm a Unique kinda person...plus I think it's easier for some people to read, and understand better

A very good story. It's nice to know we're not the only ones writing Enos/Daisy stories. It's a good, easy-to-read, style too.

Thank ya very much, I'm tryin' ta finish it up A.S.A.P,

so I can start postin some of my other stories that are in my head

OOOOOhhhhhh maaaaannn! Must...read...more...GAH! This is getting toooooooo interesting!

You have no idea

nice cliffhangers there. assuming she broke the heel of her shoe not the heel of her foot right?

Yeah the heel of her shoe