1hellraiser Posted March 8, 2005 Report Share Posted March 8, 2005 Tell Me what you think I can take it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
waylon Posted March 11, 2005 Report Share Posted March 11, 2005 The story is real good. If you guys aint read it yet you shoud. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1hellraiser Posted March 22, 2005 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2005 I been busy, trying to fix my truck, and this stupid computer. Anyone wanna help with part 4 of the story jump in. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1hellraiser Posted March 23, 2005 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2005 Part 4 is done, yall. PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK. I REALLY VALUE EVERYONES OPINION. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1hellraiser Posted April 4, 2005 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2005 Part 5 has arrived, everybody sit back and enjoy. I'm beginning yall dont like me, leave a reply for it please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamanda Posted April 4, 2005 Report Share Posted April 4, 2005 The plot looks good, but we'll have to read some of your other stuff to straighten out who all the new characters are. That's why we put a post at the beginning of "The Next Generation Part II" of just the characters and how they were related to the originals. Do you have a post somewhere that describes who John and Beth and all them are?As far a writing goes, you might want to put some spaces between paragraphs so it's a little easier to read. We find that a lot of writers here need to do that.Hope this helps. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julieduke Posted April 4, 2005 Report Share Posted April 4, 2005 Is Boss going take over his former job in the story. Julieduke Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1hellraiser Posted April 4, 2005 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2005 Hi, all thanx for the responce. The characters, of Beth, debbie, jake, and jr, bo, luke, daisy, boss, and cooter were borrowed, from other stories. If, I messed them up, i'm sorry, they just seemed to flow with the charecters, in that they were already established. I usually, write between 1 and 3 in the morning, so all I can claim is part exhaustion, and ignorance. Julie: The buick grand national, was the last muscle car made, (that normal people can afford) for years. The frame looks to be the same as the monte carlo. The buick is actually a more famous car, for that year (87-88), because it had the 3.8 liter, with a turbo. Plus the car was real light, and i really want one. The wallpaper I have for my computer is an 87 "gnx". Actually, your dad might enjoy this web site, www.kick-asscars.com. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Julieduke Posted April 6, 2005 Report Share Posted April 6, 2005 Thanks my enjoyed his Regal thow, and my brother outraced a mustang with iy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1hellraiser Posted April 17, 2005 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2005 Part 6 has arrived. Read on for your pleasure. Tell me what you think. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1hellraiser Posted May 2, 2005 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2005 I just posted part 7. Tell me what you think. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1hellraiser Posted May 18, 2005 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2005 Part 8 is up. Leave a feedback. Thanks, HR Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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